UPSC CSAT : Sentence Correction Home Exercise 03,DIRECTIONS for questions 6 to 10:

Thursday 19 February 2015

Sentence Correction Home Exercise 03,DIRECTIONS for questions 6 to 10:

DIRECTIONS for questions 6 to 10: Each of the following questions consists of a sentence, with some parts of it underlined which could be erroneous. From among the choice given, you have to select an answer that is the possible replacement for the underlined part of the key, sentence.   While choosing the right answer, please pay particular attention to the syntax, idiom, usage and economy of words being used.
 
6.       Down zoning , zoning that typically results in the reduction of housing density, allows for more open space in areas where little water or services exist.
A.      Little water or services exist
B.      Little water or services exists
C.      Few services and little water exists
D.      There are few services and little available water

7.         Dr. Hakuta’s research among Hispanic children in the United States indicates that the more the children use both Spanish and English; their intellectual advantage is greater in skills underlying reading ability and nonverbal logic.
A.      Their intellectual advantage is greater in skills underlying reading ability and nonverbal logic
B.      Their intellectual advantage is the greater in skills underlying reading ability and nonverbal logic
C.      The greater their intellectual advantage in skills underlying reading ability and nonverbal logic
D.      in skills that underlay reading ability and nonverbal logic, their intellectual advantage is the greater

8.       Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio; mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant numbers who are susceptible to the life- threatening effects of press eating habits.

A.      Just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio
B.      Like as polio vaccine , which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio
C.      Similar to polio vaccine which his  given to every person in order to protect the few who might actually contract polio
D.       While , to protect the few who might actually contract polio ,polio vaccine is given to every person

9.       Dr. Sayre’s lecture recounted several little-known episodes in the relations between nations that illustrate what is wrong with alliances and treaties that do not have popular support.

A.      Relation between nations that illustrates
B.      Relation of one nation with another that illustrates
C.      Relations between nations that illustrate
D.      Relation of one nation with another and illustrate

10.   Dr. Tonegawa won the Nobel Prize for discovering how the body can constantly change its genes to fashion a seeming unlimited number of antibodies each specifically targeted at an invading microbe or foreign substance.

A.      Seeming unlimited number of antibodies, each specifically targeted at
B.      Seeming unlimited number of antibodies, each targeted specifically to
C.      Seeming unlimited number of antibodies, all specifically targeted at
D.      Seemingly unlimited number of antibodies, each targeted specifically at

Answer: 



6.       D    the adjective little modifies ‘ mass nouns” (e.g. water), refer to some undifferentiated Quantity; the adjective fey modifies “count nouns” (e.g... services), which refer to made up to distinct members that can be considered” Hence, choices A and B are incorrect because little properly modify services.
Also, since water and services are being discussed as a pair, they should logically be treated as a compound subject requiring a plural verb; thus, the singular exists (in B and C) is wrong.
Choice D is the best; the plural verb is used, and few correctly modifies services.

7.       C    The best choice is C.
The phrase the more the children should be completed by a parallel as in the greater their … advantage. Only C correctly completes the structure with a parallel phrase.
Choices A, B and D present structures that are unwieldy and awkward in addition to being nonparallel, and they state the relationship between language use and skills development less clearly than C does.
Also, underlying in B is incorrect; the meaning of this sentence requires the present participle of ‘underlie, “underlying as, a modifier of skills.

8.       B   As the sentence is referring to two techniques which are used for similar things the word used should be ‘Like polio vaccine “which is only given in B.

9.       C   As the subject in the clause is “relations” which is plural, it has to be followed by “That illustrate.” Hence C.

10.   D    “Seemingly “(adverb) should be used with fashion (verb) and in the second part the phrase should be “targeted specifically at”. Hence d.

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